Par0xysM's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Origin - DnB]

Nice!

I liked how your song blended a very relaxed feel and a fast paced energetic feel into one. The filters on the drums added quite a bit and made it more interesting. One thing would be to add a bit more variation into the piece, but that's just my personal opinion.
Very nice job on the song!

ChrisisD responds:

Yeah, variation... I tried to keep it simple and concentrate on the beat. Indeed it's rather simple. Thanks for the review!

[Revitalized (Demo)]

Stunning

Very nice use of synthesizers, buildups, and even some effects! Very impressive, and it sounds great. Much better than anything I've done, so I apologize for not being able to give you anything constructive to work off of.

ThunderHorseL responds:

No problem, I always like straight-forward reviews, anyway. :p

[Commence Battle]

Pretty Cool!

Very nice job on the track! I found that I enjoyed the final portion of the song with the quick synth the best.
One thing I'd like to say however, is that you should look for a better crash cymbal sound, the one used was really bad in my opinion.

zhengman777 responds:

Thanks! The synth was actually an afterthought, since the ending sounded empty without it. I'm glad it worked out.

Ah, is it? I don't have a good ear when dealing with drum kits. But yeah, I'll try some other crash cymbals out.

EDIT: I switched them. A little less obnoxious, no?

[random thingy lol]

Good!

I actually wasn't expecting something like this when I read the title of your song was 'random thingy lol'. I liked the bass part and your main synthesizer was neat. Good work with the song.

bikekid2222 responds:

well im not very creative when it comes to song titles haha
thanks

[Hard Rock Cafe]

So Much Potential..

The song had so much potential, it could have been a lot better. The guitar part was good and catchy, great composing on your part, however repeating it for three minutes and forty six seconds strait is just plain boring. Add another guitar, put in some bass.

The song needs to build up, and the addition of more instruments will help that considerably.

buddhaboy7 responds:

Yeah i totally get what you mean, thanks for the advice!

[Autum's Winter]

Could use a few touches.

It was a nice song, however I found it to be far too repetitive on the piano and the percussion/drum part. Try to mix things up, change the main piano part around a bit and tweak a new drum part to fit it.

It seemed a bit shallow as well, there wasn't really much behind the piano, adding different synths or an underlying piano part would add so much more to the song.

KuroTheFox responds:

Yeah I kinda thought the same way, I'll change it up a bit

[Sorrow Of Life]

Very Good!

You did a stupendous job, I especially like the drums in the background, they weren't repetitive and they meshed with the music perfectly!

mr-vincent responds:

Thanks :)